The movement of people from the countryside into the cities is happening in many parts of the world, resulting in the problems, especially in cities.
What are the causes of this movement, and how can it be reversed
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is known that urbanization process is going in the majority of Earth. The consequences of migration result to the cities. In this essay will be considered the reasons of migration, and the ways to solve the consequences of it.
Migration is a global process, and one of the world issues. In other words, people move from villages to towns, from towns to cities, from cities to the different countries. The first and the main reason to relocate is the desire to have better life, because of poor life conditions and money. Men want to earn more, give better education to their descendants, get better job to be able to promote and so on. However it affects to the life in the rural areas, which are becoming devastated. In the result, people of suburbs have lack of professionals, also, the agriculture of the country will fall. Other reason is changing life. For example, everybody think that living in other place is better, and humans just relocate. Nevertheless, mostly they face unemployment, expensive services and dwellings. Therefore, migration affect to internal economy of the state.
There exist several solutions to reduce the movement from the villages into cities. Firstly, it is improvement of the life in the suburbs, providing better infrastructure, medicine and education. It is possible by providing the houses and some perks to the young professionals for living in the rural areas for at least 3 -5 years. Secondly, it is governmental programs to increase welfare of people, who live in the countryside. It may be some grants for agricultural sector or supporting program to manage crop and cattle. Therefore, villages start to flourish and the economy will grow. In the result, it will significantly reduce migration to the cities.
To conclude, many people are moving from the suburbs into the cities, because of money and bad life conditions. However, it is possible to keep rural areas by developing them. Good education, medicine and ability to earn will make countryside flourish and cut movement of humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...er job to be able to promote and so on. However it affects to the life in the rural are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, at least, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05934718101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87709294238 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4264943761 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.1304347826 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17872690178 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425924315263 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430818831173 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103680201982 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178550775853 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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