Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is noticeable that developing countries witnessed a dramatic growth in the popularization of multinational businesses. In spite of several drawbacks that the development of multinational companies emerges, it seems to me that its benefits are more important.
On the one hand, multinational businesses can be highly problematic for many reasons. One of the most key disadvantages is the negative environment it creates for local employees. These problems can be triggered to local stories following an example: vendors or small sellers can not compete in the samples, quantity, quality, as well as the pride of products due to mass-produced commodities being manufactured by multinational companies with high manpower and ultra-modern technology. Another noticeable drawback is environmental pollution caused by a number of companies that were built to serve this. For instance, toxic gasses from factories are increasingly released into the environment.
On the other hand, I would argue that the disadvantages of increasing multinational companies pale in comparison with the benefits. Firstly, a lot of job opportunities are the main advantage of these businesses. Manufacturing mass-produced products, as well as services, required a large amount of labor with a high salary, thus solving the problem of unemployment. Therefore, the living standard of local residents is raised which contributes to the development of countries. In addition, international relationships should be taken into consideration as enormous potential for this market. Namely, the development of multinational companies not only strengthens the economy, and develops the power of the nation but also through it makes diplomacy between nations easier.
In conclusion, several drawbacks that tourism has can be diminished if having the right solution. There are more potential benefits that the authorities need to be concerned about.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81272084806 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47234235178 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3628836757 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250523881271 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761092399108 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647001469507 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141474650834 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919366887971 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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