Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hitherto, the globalization has led to the cultural interference among many nations, the question of whether this bring benefits or not has been raising public attention. While many people lament that it is unnecessary to focus on studying outer-cultures, I oppose this view by giving some rational evidences.
It is conspicuous that almost resident in this day and age lack knowledge of their local’s history, so the government should open an investigate in culture in order to supply historical evidences to domestic art galleries and museums. Furthermore, there are many outer-culture that inappropriate to their local habits and customs and lead to the diversion of resident’s cognition, that means authorities must identify which one is rational.
Albeit these forementioned advantages there are tons of critical benefits of focusing on external culture that out weight the domestic one . On economic stand point, culture exchange will heighten the country’s reputation by making the nation become multi-culture destination, which is not only attract more foreign museum goers but also help the government to build oversea relationship. A huge budget from different parts of the world will be invested for the nation to build more multi-culture art galleries or museums, we can gain profit from that activity and increase people’s living standard. On top of that, the studying of many civilizations can increase local residents’ literature about histories of different places. Individual country have their own distinct customs, some of which are worth studying, a person who have abundant knowledge about oversea culture can easily integrate into many external destinations. So the cultural interference is critical for developing country from economic aspect to literature field.
In conclusion, instead of learning too much in local habits and customs, we should study more about oversea civilizations
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... history, so the government should open an investigate in culture in order to supply historica...
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Suggestion: .
...culture that out weight the domestic one . On economic stand point, culture exchan...
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...laces. Individual country have their own distinct customs, some of which are wort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6275862069 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1044339557 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2868859915 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.363636364 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146823222069 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526930344495 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334787461143 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720882639291 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523050008066 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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