The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. what problems does it cause? how can we save these problems ?
For the past few decades, there have been a plethora of environmental problems owing to the fast pace of economic development. And the alarming rate of the consumption of natural resources is considered one of the most serious issues which should be tackled immediately. My following essay will clarify some consequences of this problem and suggest some solutions to address it.
To commence with, there is no denying that the scarcity of natural resources will lead to unimaginable results regarding almost every aspect of our life, making it more difficult in building a sustainable future for the next generations. First and foremost, the lack of fresh water, oil and forests will definitely destroy the balance of the ecosystem. As they are all significant factors which are closely related and contribute to create a balanced environment, the depletion of only one resource will result in the disruption of the whole chain. Secondly, a sharp decrease in the amount of natural resources is highly likely to give rise to a plenty of unsolvable problems in society. People’s living conditions will be negatively influenced, leading to the shortage of many necessities. Last but not least, the global economy will also experience a worldwide crisis when facing the deficiency of many critical natural resources. It is highly probable that there will be a disruption in the industrial activities, and global supply chain.
Therefore, these problems should be drastically addressed as soon as possible by proactive measures. Initially, on the national scale, the most crucial long term solution is putting an emphasis on education. When all citizens graspe a deep understanding about this issue and its consequences, they will actively engage in a lot of activities to solve this and protect their future. Besides, it is crucial for the authority to set a limit on the amount of natural resources that firms and industrial zones can use per year, and closely supervise them to make sure they obey the law. Moreover, on the international scale, world leaders need to create a council, and make commitments to keep this issue under control. There also should be cooperation among countries to help each other achieve their goals better.
To sum up, if the rate of consumption of natural resources keeps rising, this will spawn a lot of problems for the society and exert a negative effect on our future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15051020408 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89092636139 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573979591837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6814303794 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.764705882 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202808224064 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626656521223 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496397351542 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12633190186 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021185062541 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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