New media has a great influence on people's lives, is this a negative or positive development?
<!--break-->With the rapid developments of the internet and social media, it has become easy for new media to deliver information and news to the public. Although drawbacks do exist, the advantages are countless. I believe that the benefits have more significance than the demerits.
<!--break-->On the one hand, the proliferation of the World Wide Web and social media have made accessing information faster and easier. With a few clicks of a button, news of the world, health and sports articles, personal information, and much more are now readily available. For instance, laptops and tablets enable popular applications, such as Facebook and Twitter, which allow people to connect with each other, share photos, news, events, and informative articles. As a result, people are able to expand their knowledge, keep up with important events, and enhance their critical thinking in making every day life decisions.
<!--break-->On the other hand, cyberbullying and accessing inappropriate websites have risen from the revolution of new media. The fast spread of false information has made it easy for teenagers to hide behind their screens and cyberbully each other while facing no consequences. In addition, young children are able to reach improper websites making them more vulnerable to predators who can take advantages of them. For instance, the suicide rates amongst young adults have dramatically increased due to cyberbullying, as well as the kidnapping rates of children who are used for sex trafficking. Therefore, it is important to recognize the flaws of new media and take crucial steps to control these issues.
<!--break--> In conclusion, compared to the disadvantages that can be monitored by parents, the vast improvements which resulted from the innovation of new media definitely exceeds its negative effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personal information, and much more are now readily available. For instance, lap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49823321555 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11170018169 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9268361489 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.692307692 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126946448315 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443867060359 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534716331594 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867770036902 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314853297607 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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