New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the past, people must go to flea markets or grocery stores to buy goods for their basic needs. However, with the development and widespread of mobile phone and the Internet, people can go shopping at home and the goods will be delivered to their houses. In my opinion, I believe that new technologies, in particular cell phone and the Internet, change the way people live and help people save time.
On the one hand, I agree that new technologies, especially the Internet, improve the life conditional standard of citizens. It is because people can buy anything for their needs via the Internet not belong to the places they live. For instance, people in a big city are easy to find a good and compare prices with the same one while other people in rural has lack shops and information of goods to compare. Therefore, citizen in further distance can easily search and purchase commodities for their basic needs via the Internet.
Nevertheless, I believe that the key consideration for people when they use the Internet is the risk attached. Most people think it is hardly to search a trusty shop which customer rarely worry about the quality of the products. Because they just access to the goods through photos and product descriptions which the shop provide. Therefore customers are certainly buying counterfeit products and unqualified products. For example, according to research of the Ministry of industry and trade of Japan, there are 11 percent of people buying counterfeit goods on e-commerce.
In conclusion, although citizen will have some problems which new technologies bring forward, I think that new technologies, in particular mobile phone and the Internet, transform people live and help it to be better and better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: percents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06597222222 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75310001688 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3371018104 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113504358205 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434989665931 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429371382563 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802836530086 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367570201147 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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