New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is said that the development of technology and buying methods are changing how purchasers live. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view as the following reasons.
The first reason is the development of technology leads to the popularity of online shopping, which means that individuals can purchase what they want by a click. In urban areas, shopping on the Internet saves a great deal of time just by staying at home and purchasing various items instead of waiting line at the supermarket. In addition, in small towns or rural areas, there are not as many big stores with various items as cosmopolitan cities, therefore, using shopping apps is a suitable choice for them. Products such as art works, holiday tours or concert tickets can be obtained easily by those living in areas that do not have numerous physical stores.
Another significant reason is people can control their buying process. Online shopping gives people the opportunity to shop 24/7 with benefits, for example: easily comparing prices, getting a refund if consumers are not satisfied with products, offering discounts or browsing as for long as they like without disruption from sale assistants. Especially, shoppers can review products via shopping apps, which means that online shops must have quality products and improve them.
In conclusion, it goes without saying that new technologies and ways of buying has led to the change of consumers’ lives as there are countless advantages of using Internet for shopping. However, with the development of this kind of shopping, the bankruptcy of many traditional retailers may happen in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18490566038 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76366084908 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5033170573 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205897479055 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792798212915 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688269460796 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146160565476 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841930246559 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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