News media has become more influential in people’s lives. Other believe it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this temporary setting, news media is given paramount importance in human lives. Some are of the opinion that it has detrimental development. Considering this situation, it is crucial to explore from two perspectives.
To begin with, some news containing crimes and false information has several demerits. To be precise, as the growth of the media industry, many of them are manipulated by politics or supported by profitable companies financially. Moreover, some news related to these areas tend to be distorted and omitted deliberately in order to maintain their public image. As a result, this can form false views among their audiences without any awareness, thereby enticing the public on turning blind eyes to potential risks, such as uncovered scandals, or food safety incidents. Besides, reporting a massive quantity of crimes by the press is terrifying to local citizens, and they will believe their safety is under threatened, which triggers their negative emotion and alleviate the positive ones. In another word, it can impose unnecessary stress and anxiety to local neighborhoods. Consequently, causing harmful effects on their mental health.
Hence, propagating these types of news through media will have disastrous repercussion.
On the other hand, news media may also have some merits. To be specific, spreading emergency news, such as natural disaster, and epidemics, through the press is pivotal to human lives. This is because people can respond to these situations immediately and effectively. Furthermore, it increases the tendency to prevent people from potential risks. For example, in Japan, their TV programs are designed to report urgent news twenty-four-seven, so many people prepare for earthquakes before it happened, so they can protect themselves from being injured. Additionally, because some urgent news report recent disaster around the world, viewers can provide humanitarian to those affected place immediately, and alleviate their sufferings. Hence, the news industry has a significant contribution to human surroundings.
To sum up, it is apparent media will produce some negative influence, but by no means, should we ignore the positive side of it. In my opinion, I strongly agree that news makes improve human’s life better and play a vital role in our life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51966292135 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02088817577 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612359550562 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6585382734 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16723359711 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492142441591 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375122636799 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095016895344 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257454489471 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.