News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
The news is considered by many people to be the important thing that could influence their lives. This essay will first describe why bad news dominates the headlines and it will then address the questions of whether news-gatherers should aim more on good news or not.
Reading news in the morning brings information of current events to a lot of people and it could affect how we live, such as whether we decide to bring umbrella or not or economic recession that could have an impact on our job performance. Furthermore, people like to hear about politics issue especially on election day. People determined their choice that is important to the future from what they gain in news broadcasts.
However, news broadcasts concentrate so much on negative news and depressing events. These cause users paying more attention to terrible events. This shown by a tricky survey that ran in Canada without known by the participants. As the result, all of the contributors often choose stories with a negative tone, because it could be a signal for them to avoid danger.
On the other hand, too much listening to bad news also has the drawback. It could reduce people ‘s trust to the government, even the nation could be divided. That is why people need to hear positive stories namely people’s achievements. It would give the citizens positive energy and they would act positively such as being happy and optimistic that can spread to other people.
All in all, things change in the world constantly, that is why news is necessary. And people need to make time for reading or watching the news but remain balancing what they get between positive and negative news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...own by the participants. As the result, all of the contributors often choose stories with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93639575972 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65270080032 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586572438163 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2521822678 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468145386669 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152383146751 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128836803913 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266182818191 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10742920298 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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