Nowadays, animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animal to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a controversy surrounding the use of animal for laboratory experiments in curative medicine over the years. While some individuals believe such acts are inhuman and therefore be condemned, others think it is generally beneficial to mankind. Both sides will be discussed in this essay and reasons will be given why the latter stance appears to hold more water.
On the one hand, proponents of the former belief claim that animal testing does not only bring unjustified suffering to the subjects involved, but also that humans does not have the moral obligation to subject these animals to torture all in the name of developing medicines or publishing research papers. For instance, many pre-clinical students in Africa are sometimes required to bring a specie of rodent; multimammate rat to the lab for the purpose of gathering information required to publish a yearly medical journal. Such animals gets subjected to unjust sufferings and are caged up for weeks without food while some eventually die in certain conditions.
On the other hand, supporters of animal testing claim the aforementioned downside can easily be overlooked because this practice can prove to be lifesaving, which one cannot agree any more. Carrying out test using animals have resulted in undisputed breakthrough especially in clinical and therapeutic medicine. For example, many drugs and vaccines targeted against the COVID-19 virus are required to go through the animal trials phase before they are endorsed for human use. Scores of these medical products have several undesirable side effects that could even be fatal if not properly tested and controlled using these animal. Besides, humans are higher than these animals on the food chain and as such have the liberty to experiment using them so long it is beneficial to mankind.
In conclusion, while the opinion of other may differ, I believe the use of animal for testing is one that can be fully supported beside it is key in determining the efficacy and safety of drugs and vaccine for human and should therefore be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19584569733 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74860431868 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59940652819 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0921860274 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.916666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325430788191 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11572757972 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559813100555 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195279860613 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346801846399 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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