Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Over the past decade, global traveling has become a viral trend that attracts many people. Although this might have some drawbacks, its benefit still outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly, it is noteworthy that international tourism brings huge financial contributions to many countries’ economy. This is due to the fact that visitors are not only visiting heritages and free outstanding landscapes but also staying in hotels and using the services in the country. The more foreign tourists, the more profits earned from accommodation and touristy activities such as: selling street food or lending motorbike and bicycle. Therefore, it is essential for every cpuntries, especially the developing ones, to provide worthy traveling experience in order to earn more money.
Secondly, another fact that should be taken into account is that international visiting could narrow the gap between human in different parts of the world. The counter argument raised by objectors to this is that this type of traveling may cause unreasonable conflicts between the locals and the foreigners according to their unsimilar cultures, characteristics, and languages. This justification is true to some extent, nevertheless, it should be acknowledged that nowadays, the popularity of English and another global languages can tackle this problem effectively. Meanwhile, visiting all other countries means people can have a more visually view and gain more understanding about that countrie’s unique traditions. America could be cited as a good example since this area is always the top-choice for tourists despite its multinational citizens.
In conclusion, in spite of some disadvantages, under no circumstances should governments overlook the advantages of universal tourism in economic and globalization aspects as mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76951672862 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19083865689 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669144981413 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4385331839 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717863710564 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267314394335 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395006437472 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467204861787 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206819320329 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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