Nowadays it is not only large studios that are able to make films. Digital filmmaking now enables anyone to make films.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Currently, huge and small studios are able to shot movies. Developing digital filmmaking allows shooting movies to every person. This essay will reveal the advantages and disadvantages of digital filmmaking, however, I think that the pros outweigh drawbacks.
On the one hand, the development of digital filmmaking has its beneficial sites. First of all, digitization will decrease costs and people could shot movies with a limited budget. Cinema makers need to purchase for design, because they may draw it. The economy will affect on everything. Furthermore, film producers may pay more to actors and other supporting staff. Finally, people with amazing and unusual plots could produce their films. It is known that Oscar and Cannes festival winners are mostly authors or small studio's movies. More talented persons will be discovered. Therefore, Filmmaking will develop as an art.
On the other hand, the quality of movies will fall down, because many amateurs will start to shot movies, which will reflect on the excellence of the cinema. Initially, digital cinema requires good computer skills to edit films. Secondly, digital cameras lose details in whites and blacks. Finally, it is difficult to get high quality in low light conditions. As a result, if people go to the cinema and watch the “garbage” film, they will be disappointed and will not go there again. The effect of the soap opera will remain in humans’ memories. It means that cinematography will lose their customers and money.
To conclude, digital films have changed the industry, so developing digitization in filmmaking enables any person to shot movies. Moreover, small studios are able to produce a cinema. I think that it is a positive trend because people with a tiny budget could make movies. Also, the world could open new talents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'shoot'
Suggestion: shoot
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ause they may draw it. The economy will affect on everything. Furthermore, film producers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24232081911 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67073078851 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1907358647 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.7826086957 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7391304348 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47826086957 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185086343552 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528764046792 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573678748563 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142484649915 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083059280573 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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