Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to wor for company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In this modern world, many people prefer to establish own company rather than working with any other company as an employee. I agree with the statement despite of some backdraws and this essay will examine the arguments on both favor and against of the topic.
To begin with, people always want to be own boss rather than working under any other. Today being entrepreneur is not so much complicated like earlier due to the help of internet service and systematic process. While, internet is the global market place for any amateur entrepreneur to get different idea, motivation and to research market globally. However, people’s needs are increasing day by day, and to fulfill these many people are choosing to be part time self- employed as well. For instance, the government or private sector employee, who work 10 am to 5 pm, involve themselves in part time own business in morning and evening. Likewise, the world statistic survey had revealed that, the percentage entrepreneur is increasing rapidly in the world.
Moreover, flexible working hour with freedom, more saving, upgraded life style, work of interest are the major reasons of being independed.
Secondly, self-employee has to choose some risk with advantages as well. The greater risk of amateur entrepreneur is scarcity of finance to start up office and the connections and links with market. In addition, they can fail to make enough profit as per expectation, so the income can be instable. Additionally, self-employees have to work long hour than being employee of others and must deal with all responsibilities by own, result they cannot spend enough time with family and friends. For example, independent person do not get any sick holiday, public holiday or pension and any other facilities, they have to work all day and night.
In conclusion, self-employment is attracting many youths in modern time to be independent rather than working for others, while there are several dis- advantages. They have to work effectively to balance personal and professional life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 454, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ll these many people are choosing to be part time self- employed as well. For instance, t...
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Line 4, column 591, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...rk 10 am to 5 pm, involve themselves in part time own business in morning and evening. Li...
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Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun dis seems to be countable; consider using: 'several disses'.
Suggestion: several disses
...han working for others, while there are several dis- advantages. They have to work effectiv...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'disses'?
Suggestion: disses
...ing for others, while there are several dis- advantages. They have to work effectiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21148036254 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85206615618 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0231768199 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27095035696 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909122506439 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925482876712 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155909757305 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614145821653 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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