Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.
What are the negative impacts of children playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
We cannot deny that, in recent time the usages and access of modern and smart technology are in wide range and due to this many children prefer to play with technology from earlier instead of outdoor games. There are many positive impacts of technology but sometime in childhood negative impacts exceed the positive. The essay will discuss on negative impact of it and possible measures to reduce it.
To begin with, due to the easy accessibility of internet and smartphone people life is becoming easier in many aspects, but there are many disadvantages of modern technology as well. Especially, when children are addictive with the internet games, this can ruin the physically and mentally sometime. The main demerits of computer games are, children can develop introvert personality in them when they are more addict with internet games and it also help them for being unsocial. Similarly, due to the various kinds of violent games, teenagers become more aggressive in nature and can bring negative thought inside them. the recent survey had revealed that, children who are more interested in video game they tend to stay alone inside the room and feel uncomfortable to be socialize. Different kind of phycological problems and less attention on others work are also the main negative effects of playing video games.
Furthermore, there are many possible measure to reduce negative effect, such as parents should pay more attention on children and get involve in their activities and get update about their behaviour from teacher and friends as well. for instance, when offspring get more attention on childhood from family, they can easily involve in society and increase their academic grade. Parents should allow the limited time for internet to their children and highlight them about the negative effect of technology time to time. School must also create more physical opportunity for their children so they can get interest in outdoor games more.
In conclusion, due to the unlimited access of technology children are having more negative effect of it. So, the family and school should play vital role to reduce the problem and make more effective use of internet on children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1797752809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55365352386 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497191011236 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.444137714 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.933333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255227641952 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918426811197 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428783392515 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160854282173 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339448518934 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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