Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in a city. Why do you think they move to cities? Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?
Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, as urbanization sprawls its stretches, an egregious proclivity descends into every rural area: many youngsters leave their homeland to seek glamour and fortune. While many people concoct a heated conversation pertaining to how the elderly there can work on their own and how it will make population distribution more uneven, I believe that cities conspicuously can offer more benefits to the young.
There are no profiteering jobs back then in the boondocks or Hicksville, for the deficiency in modernized facilities and digitized workplaces lead to the insufficiency of appreciable monthly wages. However, urban areas can provide ambitious young adults with more vocations and more lucrative emoluments. Money, therefore, can be regarded as the main catalyst which greases the process of luring the talented youth out of their old lairs.
On the other hand, megacities or developed boroughs can be ostensibly appealing when better amenities, hectic events and the bustling ambiance are prevalent and rife. Provided with these conveniences, young people might waver and vacillate when they have to come back to their old lands. Moreover, in bucolic areas, there is a legion of inevitable natural disasters that can wreak havoc in people’s life. To dodge that, even when they’ve floundered in clambering higher statuses or procuring more promising incomes, young people still choose to round off their life in the cities, where they can be treated with more innovative equipment and take out their insurance if necessary.
In conclusion, urbanization happens everywhere, and soon, it will eclipse rural areas. Therefore, that the young strive to adapt to this more prosperous prospect is fathomable. Instead of grappling with this problem by chasing them out, the government should stack out more revolutionary permutations to make sure that agriculture will be safe and sound when there is no one left.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48993288591 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89915796165 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654362416107 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0739471134 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169196814624 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603935793986 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495077375319 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998026578898 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319746049832 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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