One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world in soaring upsurge of mass media including TV, radio, and newspaper. There is widespread worry that these technologies have now become a essential part of our lives. In my opinion, this proposition merits little consideration and I will explain why in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, the invention of TV, radio, and internet have soared the value of mass media drastically in the recent decades. There are numerous forms of transferring media in this time. Mass media has now become a part of our life and we cannot live without it. For example, there are so many things involved in it which are a part in a persons routine such as series, movies, news, educational attainments, market share value, and so on that a person cannot ignore and live with.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that because of a whole lot of entertainment and knowledge are just within a click, people now started to communicate less. As they can engage in different activities and only need less struggle than engaging with other people, they isolated themselves. Another important fact is that, sometimes it also result in the sharing of fake news, cyberbullying, and so on.
From what has been discussed one can conclude that despite some benefits of the increase in mass media including TV, radio and newspaper, the drawbacks of this trend are indeed too dire to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that these technologies have now become a essential part of our lives. In my opin...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...t of this argument is that because of a whole lot of entertainment and knowledge are just...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...portant fact is that, sometimes it also result in the sharing of fake news, cyberbully...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94190871369 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73231394704 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0285574309 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329287765748 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113287638572 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10236774552 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187139243572 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11645272073 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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