Nowadays, medical research projects funded by private companies, In your opinion research should be funded by individual, private or government. Give reasons of this answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
The emergence of new resistant and more fatal diseases demands the increased research. Today most of private pharmaceutical industries sponsored medical research projects. In this essay we will discuss the why most of the projects by non government organisation and government, private and each approaches toward research in improvement in over all health of society.
Although, providing better health care facilities is responsibility of institution because of limited budget its difficult for country to funded them. Hence, research requires millions of dollar and specific time period for its completion. Therefore, private organisations keeping in mind benefit they will make in return made investment in such projects. For example Bill gate foundation funding three medical research project on dengue, Tuberculosis and Cancer in development of effective treatment. Though its proper treatment yet not discover but a pharmaceutical company Glaxo smith Kline also sponsoring this with collaboration with Bill Gate foundation. This company has agreement of formula of medicine would be developed by this organisation only after discovery.
however, in my point of view funding any research is not only possible by single organisation either government or personal. Because of colossal investment required along with resources. Many projects should be in collaboration so smoothly continued otherwise program might be stop due to lack of funding. This is the case happen in our local university when a leading research programs on bio fuels only hampered just because government did not releases money for project. Because current economic condition was under recession therefore program halted for three years.
In this essay we discussed the research particularly related to diseases and medicines are mostly sponsored by private organisation which eventually leads to increased prices. In my opinion government and people should coöperate to excel in that field.
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...ould coöperate to excel in that field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76712328767 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03245254486 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0861995183 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244704056724 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764999314916 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516262096217 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150137978832 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285990289339 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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