Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment have to compete with the younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
It is true that there is an increasingly widespread concern that the competition between older workers and their counterparts in the job-market is intensive. Albeit there will undoubtedly be some several problems of this trend, both individuals and government should take steps to mitigate these potential consequences.
Cometing with the older people, the young generation is more likely to fail to hunt a job because of their lack of professional experience. In many companies, for example, old candidates would be more highly appreciated for important positions because of their exellent experience to deal with problems. However, senior workers, due to their old-fashioned perspective and delicate constitution, hardly to work under strong pressure, while the youth seem to be more creative and easily themselves in the different environments. This may lead to both physical and psychological problems such as heart diseases or depression among ageing individuals.
There are several actions that government can take to solve the problems as mentioned above. Firstly, the government should encourage enterprises to afford more jobs for gradutes to accumulate the value experience. As a results, this possively diminishes the rate of unemployment, therefore restraining the escalate level of criminals. In term of senior workers, they shoud be willing to take part in training courses to update their skills. Only the proper guidance and instructions can help them adapt to the change of environment and be independent of working.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of increasing rivalry between the old and the young in the job-market and appropriate measures can be taken to tackle the problems, not only for government but also for individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
... to accumulate the value experience. As a results, this possively diminishes the rate of ...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... of unemployment, therefore restraining the escalate level of criminals. In term of senior w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5962962963 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16155966789 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5802347209 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135383771754 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497773290028 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293441690715 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763345171969 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381705360672 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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