in recent years , there are a lot of people who choose giving birth late in life . I think that , this trend have various causes and effects on family or social life .
On the one hand , a nowadays , there are a lot of social member are the marriage early when they are student at university . There for , they are very young to have children , if they giving birth early , they must spend various times on taking care of their children so they will don't enough time to study further which can help their to seek good employment . Moreover , delay have children that can support their have a lot of times in developing relationship . For example , if they giving birth early , they will have to prepare a lot of things as money , ... However , if they have children later , they will have enough to prepare and life better
Anyway , there are children later also have a lot of disadvantage impacts . In term of family, this trend can widen the generation gap so that this has negative effect on family close-knit. In addition, giving birth late poses many health risks for both mother and baby, including misscarage risk and birth defects. These risks may have effect on quality of working labour in the future.
In conclusion, there are many evident reasons for the trend in which couples delay having children and this can have some negative effects on family and social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71848739496 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29290323095 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504201680672 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.990297216 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244687414647 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11254796097 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877454253602 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188358530007 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688127706745 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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