Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life ?
Young people nowadays have a tendency to have children at their old age. There are some reasons for this trend, which are the root of some negative impacts on both family life and community as a whole.
On the one hand, these days youngsters probably tend to enjoy their own life rather than settling down and having children since their considerations are pursuing their interests and hobbies. People prefer to travel to local or even foreign attractions more willingly than pay attention for children. Additionally, many people would devote all their time to working since progressing in their careers as well as job fulfilments play an important part in their life. Provided that they do not have children, they would get the chance to spend the entire day at the workplace. Furthermore, there is some real evidence indicating that may negatively influence adults' life. For example, in order to earnestly take care of their offsprings, a working mother should give up her work and become a housewife. Those are why people choosing having children in later life.
However, this trend seems to have negative impacts on the society and family in terms of the economic and family harmony respectively. The situation in which children were born at the old age of their parents would lead to the labor shortage in some countries. Take Japan, for instance, the government in this country is struggling with the shrinking birth rate, resulted in the huge burden of social budgets as well as an insufficient labor force. Furthermore, aged parents would face the future in which their babies may suffer some genetic disorders as Down's syndrome. Besides, the generation gap would bring fail connections between parents and their child.
In conclusion, although people have many reasons justifying their decision for having children in their old age, this trend detrimentally influences on individual families and the society at large.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 832, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to have'.
Suggestion: to have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16560509554 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66069794648 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6783589749 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305227076654 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108938458941 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798762960047 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201093285516 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695263394904 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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