Marriage, a lovely term for long term relationship between two motivated souls ably assisted by social and cultural rituals, and nowadays marriage often gets priority after people turn above their 30s which I believe is positive trend.
To begin with, people nowadays are too busy and thus think less about going through conjugal life as they want to be independent and stand firmly on the ground before indulging into vicissitudes of family problems. What is more, everybody wants to complete academic qualification, settle in job with handsome salary in a bigger company and build self-esteem among society before starting connubial relationship which is usually achievable before an individual turns over 30. Further, age of twenties is transitional phase and an individual would turn over to new leaf becoming more mature and more ethical after the age of 30 which also helps in reducing the case of domestic violence one people get engaged to each other.
On the contrary, more than two third of the world population are from developing countries where the average life expectancy is only about 57 years old and fertility period between 17-35 years old. Therefore, if marriage after the age of 30 is followed then the chance of newborn would be minimal and eventually birth rate would decline which might lead to the world only with dwindling old people. Apparently, it can be surmised that getting married before the age of 30 means more population of younger people and thus more productive generation.
To recapitulate, solely adapting the policy of getting married before the age of 30 will do little to effect the society positively hence marriage must be arranged prudently so as to benefit couples as well as to the world in long term to maintain yielding population.
Could you please explain me
Could you please explain me where is my essays lagging to score more than 7 band for IELTS?
1. sentences are too
1. sentences are too long:
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.625 21.0
for example, only one sentence for one paragraph:
'Marriage, a lovely term for long term relationship between two motivated souls ably assisted by social and cultural rituals, and nowadays marriage often gets priority after people turn above their 30s which I believe is positive trend.'
2. Discourse Markers is high:
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
3. still have grammar issues:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
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Thank you so much for the quick response and guidance.
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Thank you so much for the quick response and guidance.
I loved Testbig and trying to refer to my friennds.
I believe is positive trend.
I believe it is a positive trend.
will do little to effect the society positively
will do little to affect the society positively
to the world in long term to maintain yielding population.
to the world in a long term to maintain a yielding population.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 293 350
No. of Characters: 1466 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.137 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.003 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.602 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 106 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.323 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.451 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.719 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5