Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect individuals and
society? What can be done about this?
As average life expectancy rises, people are living longer and longer after retirement, which
poses a number of problems for individuals and society. But, these tensions can be remedied
through government action.
People retiring older can lead to conflict between individuals and an increased burden on
society generally. For the young, the process of fully integrating older people into society can
be challenging. For example, many older people have quieter lifestyles, and disputes may arise
with younger individuals who are in the habit of hosting loud parties or coming home late at
night, particularly in cases where young people are taking care of older relatives. The strain on
society can also be great as older people require more medical support to treat conditions
ranging from arthritis to cancer to heart disease. This translates to a greater proportion of taxes
going to the older generation and can foster societal resentment and ageism.
The best fixes for these problems can be achieved by governmental actions. Firstly,
governments can ease the integration of generations by providing better retirement plans for
individuals. For example, in the United States, social security benefits are rarely enough to
cover retirement, so many must depend on their children. As for society, governments must be
more conscientious in planning for more substantial medical expenses. The government should
anticipate this trend only continuing in the future and set aside funds to research and apply
advanced treatments for retired citizens well into their 80s. These measures combined would
alleviate some of the weight of supporting older populations.
In conclusion, the pressures resulting from growth in the average lifespan can be countered
with forward-thinking governmental policy. This will only become more important in the future
as people live even longer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64583333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88795390853 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6741719033 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256094703331 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912181128042 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609852339999 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732386882296 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600709472335 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.