Nowadays, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives.
What are these problems?
Governments should encourage people to move to smaller towns.
Do you agree or disagree?
Modernization has had a significant impact on humankind as well as environment. In the contemporary world, residents of the urban areas encounter various hardships in their day to day life. Some individuals deem and even I believe that they should be motivated by government to migrate to smaller towns.I will elaborate my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs after highlighting some common urban problems.
To begin, the main problem prevalent in urban areas is the degradation of the quality of the air.This is primarily happening due to the over-usage of the vehicles running on fuels like petrol which emit a large amount of smoke in the atmosphere. Also, the industries operating in the residential areas and city-centres contribute in the exacerbation of this situation. Many metropolitan cities of India can be mentioned as examples of this like New Delhi, Bangalore et cetera where people can be spotted wearing masks while travelling on the roads.
Moving further, another major obstacle that hampers the harmony of the everyday lifecycle of the city-dwellers is the high density traffic on the roads. There is no doubt that this chokes the free movement of the people in such areas and they also have to spend a lot of time on the roads on daily basis. It is a well-known fact that an average person in a highly-populated metropolitan city like Los Angeles spends beyond sixty hours waiting in traffic every year.
Furthermore, to reinforce my belief that administration should encourage the urban people to move to rural areas I would say that first of all, such a migration would result in even distribution of population in all regions which means that resources and land will be properly allotted. Undeniably, it would lead to providing better lifestyle as it is better that some resources are available for all rather than all for some and not for others. Apart from this, it can also make the areas develop in a similar manner leaving no area devoid of modern amenities.
Conclusively, there are various hurdles that disturb the comfort of people of cities on daily basis. Thus, shifting towards less exploited areas can be a great idea as it can help to reduce problems to a great extent and authorities should consider it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, no doubt, as well as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04010695187 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91271228867 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7487530747 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.642857143 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161901457942 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501334479685 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393167772703 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862373947518 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279669531367 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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