Nowadays,sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. What is the reason? Do you think it is a positive development?
It is no doubt that spending much money on a good school which makes children learn to take care of themselves is going viral within benefits. There are many ways of explanation for the trend and in my opinion, it is absolutely an advantaged evolution.
As the contemporary information, several related reasons can be anticipated. The main cause is that parents do not have too much time for bringing their children up in currently fierce competition in work, so the number of students which are sent to private secondary schools are dramatically rising. Furthermore, nowadays, society has many crimes which involve kidnapping, so parents may worry about nannies and sending children to boarding schools is more and more well-known.
On the other hand, from my point of view, the development brings advantages to individuals and families. In the first place, students can gain the maturity through experiences in solving incompatible behaviors by themselves with friends. For example, a question such as: “Who will clean our room today?” might lead to a contradiction, so children will be learnt the compliance and the calm. Moreover, that perspective may reduce the charges and it is better than hiring babysitters. In reality, teachers not only teach but also can take care of children carefully because of vast parenting knowledge. Finally, children can have enough skills to survive in case they have to live far from families for their studies.
In conclusion, most reasons for the development concern the changes of economy and society. Although it is not easy for children when they are at private secondary schools, I still tend towards the viewpoint that it is a beneficial progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'beneficial progress'.
Suggestion: beneficial progress
...l tend towards the viewpoint that it is a beneficial progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22545454545 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92755504003 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1155169803 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218169953488 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653720238471 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513916429172 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133374757939 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604033899885 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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