As the living standards are becoming higher, mankind's entertainment is catching more attention and improvement. Sport is a crucial kind of activity to relax, therefore sports is getting more and more popular. As a result, sports is huge business with high earning for famous sports player and firms included both financially and other ways. From my point of view, this is a positive development for sports.
On the one hand, sports is not only a kind of entertainment but also provide us many financial opportunities. For instance, a football company which has one of the most famous and success football team in the world, they can make a quantity of profits from football industry. Therefore, they are able to contribute to their own country in both financial and reputated aspects.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that sports has provided us with many job's opportunities. People with there greatly sport ability are allowed to apply for kinds of jobs such as football players and tennis players or workers in sport companies. As the result, as far as we can see, sports business contributes significantly to reduce unemployment rate in general.
In conclusion, I assume that sports business has played a vital part of our world's economy. Not only does it satisfy the entertained demands but also facilitate to relieve the financial burden. In gerneral speaking, this is definitely a fact that this kind of sports improvement has create many positive effects
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e business with high earning for famous sports player and firms included both financia...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...hat this kind of sports improvement has create many positive effects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in general, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11157024793 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8649359626 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3904422217 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437138350042 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145438679268 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111224957505 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258804736202 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104451682962 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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