Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras).In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advent of technology, these days people are being surveilled through cellphone tracking and security cameras and many of them do not know about it which is going on. In my opinion, it has both merits and demerits.
There are many reasons why it is necessary. The first reason is that it is beneficial for the safety of masses, By knowing the local activities, the authorities are better able to guarantee their security and save people from any attack. For example, many bombings can be prevented through proper checks and better surveillance. Another reason is that If bureaucracy knows the feelings of their inhabitants, they will be able to set better laws for them. For instance, foreign and local policies are being made according to the wishes of people of their country. As a result, there will be no strike occur which may help the country to progress further. Therefore, it is essential to monitor them for their own survival.
On the other hand, many people think that it has many drawbacks. Firstly, breach of privacy of individuals of which they not know is a criminal offence. No one has the right to surveillance them without their consent because they are not criminals. Secondly, if education is adequate, there will be no need of doing monitoring such as in the most developed city, like Sweden, security cameras are very limited. Hence, it is cleared that it is also some issue.
In conclusion, with the advancement in technology, tracking of people activities secretly is become a normal routine of the government with very little awareness in people and according to me, it has both uses and uselessness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91438356164 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71746737188 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2338783447 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317105521041 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921124993729 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764898896114 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182576154462 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504581129515 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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