Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved.
What are your opinions on this?
In the modern society women have now more opportunities compared to the past. A number of individuals believe that this has created more trouble and brought negative effects. In my opinion I disagree because female play an important role in the society as well as in the family.
Firstly , women have access to every level on education and can get jobs that help the development of the country. It is true to say that female can do almost every job a men can. Because of this universities accept males and females students based on their skill and knowledge , thus raising the number of well-trained workers. Having more good quality employees will help the growth of every business and lead to an economic increase for nations.
Secondly, it is unquestionable the need of a wife in a family. Not only does she help manage the household chores, but also can now contribute to the family's financial situation. If both spouses work , the income they have will grow .Hence, they will improve their lifestyle and will afford more goods such as : bigger house and luxury cars. Moreover a wife will be more independent because she has an individually income. This means that she can take better decision regarding the use of money in the family.
To conclude, in my opinion because women have more opportunities they can help the society grow by working for important companies. The lifestyle of a family is also better compared to the past due to the fact that wives can have a financial income.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243727598566 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.143369175627 0.116061578633 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0860215053763 0.0759168565197 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0609318996416 0.0366838410393 166% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0465949820789 0.0131127313244 355% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.155750635184 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0286738351254 0.0379272487307 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62371271496 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286738351254 0.0210936926555 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.125448028674 0.0948980150116 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0430107526882 0.00437022459523 984% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00358422939068 0.00967000014798 37% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1504.0 1161.00487805 130% => OK
No of words: 261.0 196.9 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76245210728 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.73763899035 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325670498084 0.337110787985 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256704980843 0.247514529752 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149425287356 0.171178102325 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.095785440613 0.112407865282 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62371271496 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.6035676235 49.3433353143 109% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 8.93414634146 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6428571429 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.069322493 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 135.714022679 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 23.0094962315 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 0.689975730869 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.48048780488 946% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.3133552271 47.7609492067 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.52857142857 2.94281807926 52% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188405652433 0.418131533498 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0697073348062 0.181151798455 38% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0567721249292 0.0850326197045 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530553257914 0.706616315825 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129083148842 0.157042692854 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865352355862 0.228904883108 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440439707118 0.108899403657 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325430583141 0.367819155151 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0620987001179 0.0812612215331 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142169549077 0.316326947829 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447435519988 0.0921553760075 49% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70731707317 297% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 3.16585365854 347% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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