Nowadays, there is a trend that media reports focus on problems and emergencies rather
than a positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and
to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the media reports tend to emphasize on issues and emergencies rather than a positive improvement. It is a common belief that it causes detrimental effect on individuals and society. I wholeheartedly believe the same thing. This essay will address the reasons for my views as follow.
First of all, people can feel depressed and young people, especially teenagers are terrified by the outside world. Since people just see issues and emergencies splashed all over the media, they lose belief of life, they suppose that life is horrifying and there is no room for happiness. For example, youngsters may get discourage to start up their own businesses because they have seen a variety of companies running out of businesses. Therefore, the economy will experience the considerable depression and the number of people who are unemployed will gradually increase.
Secondly, individuals have difficulty moving forward because of the mindset formed by negative points of view on media. They keep their thought that the society is always unfair, hence, their attempts are useless and there is no point putting great efforts into work. On TV news or films, it is often heard that favoritism and corruption are almost everywhere in firms or government agencies. For instance, people who work conscientiously will never compete against people whose fathers or mothers are the presidents of the companies. Because of that reason, people hardly make efforts to move their career ladder or achieve their goals.
In conclusion, people will face a huge number of obstacles if they are continued exposing to the negative sides of society on news regularly. For these reasons, I strongly believe that, the media should look at the society under more optimistic eyes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27304964539 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77074735285 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.932220021 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139290067717 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459034131025 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567057022249 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903447442449 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368358964406 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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