Human lifestyle is pampered in the lap of technology. Presently, a massive number of youngsters have tendency to utilize long hours on electronic gizmos such as android phones and ipads for entertainment.Thus, masses confront various social and health issues.Here, I would like to account for cons of this trend than pros in the impending paragraphs.
There are multifarious demerits of this phenomenon. First and foremost, juveniles get distracted from their studies and mighty aspiration while surfing internet for long time.To cite an example, nowadays, offsprings are habitual to spend long hours on electronic appliances and therefore they do not pay attention toward their education and targets.As a consequence, social sites are detrimental for the upcoming future of students.Apart from this, spending overtime on social media enables children to play outdoor activities and do not interact with their family members.To justify, social sites offer great deal of amusement therefore children get allure towards electronic devices and do not prefer to play outdoor games.As a result, youngsters not only become indolent but also relationships with the family are becoming terrible due to prolonged obsession with smart phones.
Further emphasising on my point of view, electronic gadgets are roots of manifold ailments if children consume excessive time on silver screens .To demonstrate, juveniles spend leisure time on smart phones and tablets while sitting on one place and thus teenagers suffer from from lavish of diseases such as back pain,obesity and weak optics. Consequently, exorbitant usage of internet appliances do not allow adults to stay fit as a fiddle.
To recapitulate , android phones and tablets do have certain lucratives for young people in order to make their spare time productive but disadvantages overweight the advantages and hence, birth givers should restrict teenagers to consume exorbitant time on ipads and iPhones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61486486486 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00775373797 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 257.474230928 49.4020404114 521% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.428571429 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.2857142857 20.7667163134 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 57.0 5.01903807615 1136% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155331607777 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560057897956 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591979977026 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943706566048 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461342961879 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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