In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Nowadays, news media plays a more and more important role in our daily life. some people advocate the contention that newspaper is still the most important origin to get the newest information for every citizen. I completely disagree with that view point, considering that online news media has become the most influential media format.
On the one hand, newspaper is not the fastest approach to get knowledge of the latest affairs all over the world due to essential flaw. Since manufacturing a batch of newspaper includes the processes of editing passage content, press newspaper and deliver it to the reader who books it, the whole procedure usually takes at least two or three days. However, in the contrast of internet media, as soon as the news is public, every person can get informed of it. For example, the first time Notre Dame Cathedral was burnt down by an unexpected fire, many people instantly know the information and prepare to offer financial aid package to France government. therefore, in terms of propagating speed, online new media has overwhelming advantages on its counterpart.
On the other hand, electrical media also has some edges that newspaper doesn’t obtain. it is becoming an effective and feasible method for the public to participate in politic activities. For example, many governments or press have built their official website where normal people can read news, write comments about particular issues or discuss relevant affairs. therefore, this website is transformed into a convenient medium to convey public thoughts on new policy or other affairs to relevant officials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, at least, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70877192982 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.80138699838 2.80592935109 207% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5780809036 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811385122749 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0319464549332 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266327880569 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505138729111 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326342785064 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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