The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance Why do people do operations to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Improving physical beauty with plastic surgery has increased by numerous people. Due to certain factors communities prefer to modify their look to make it perfect. Although it is a positive development, I reckon that the negative aspects cannot be ignored.
Two prime reasons can be reflected that why people go for cosmetic surgery. Firstly, since in the competitive modern day, everyone wants to be attractive, so that they can attract every person towards themselves from the core of their heart with the help of personalized look. Secondly, as there are ample professions that require a good looking employee, for example, an air hostess and an actor in the film industry. As a result, other employees whose features don't match with professional requirements, find their cure in plastic surgery.
The rise in the popularity of plastic surgery is considered positive for the following reasons. The first aspect is that operating cosmetic surgery, is not only enhance people's confidence but also helps to perceive them looking young. The other paramount benefit of the surgery is that if a person's beauty is damaged due to an accident or attack and he may not be capable to look at himself in the mirror. So, definitely, in this case, plastic surgery would be a blessing for such a person to restore their first look.
Despite the above-mentioned benefits, there has also some drawbacks to plastic surgery. To commence with the first negative aspect of this surgery that it effects on human's body because the tons of chemicals are included in cosmetics, which perhaps can lead to dangerous challenges on the body such as allergy or cancer. What is more, sometimes being a clear appearance of human somewhere it creates ego in their mind, because they forget to respect those who have not a beautiful look.
To conclude, although cosmetic surgery is indispensable to rebuild people's lives and self-esteem. However, the downsides cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i reckon, in fact, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15360501567 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78463439905 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592476489028 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9383780253 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188835377688 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062894694236 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042265710974 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109952222192 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288008166409 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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