The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.

Essay topics:

The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.

The increasing traffic in many parts of the city has been become a major concern for every native of the region, so the local authorities found a solution to defeat the growth of traffic by decreasing the needs for people from home for work, grocery store and shopping malls. so this essay will articulates about it below.

To embark on, traffic is serious issue for every individual who lives in the cities and due to this people have to face many difficulties regarding this. Generally speaking, in congestion of many modes of transport causes many probabilities of accidents as well as increment of pollution which predominantly detrimental for children. so government has found a way to humiliate the traffic by reducing the human basic modes of transport which is totally unfair so this can be clear from one example, if this happens in all geographical parts of the city which could be a devastating for people as well as people who lives there. Because cars, auto rickshaw, and buses are made for human convince which is makes us quickly accessible to many distant routes.

Furthermore, thanks to the internet which has made our work very readily. due to this sort of technology we can able to predict many analysis of traffic by the digital maps where we can keep an eye of congregation of traffic before leaving the home. And it is the better measurement to reduce the traffic and that is proven, that is advantageous for inhabitants for instance, a legendary company google has reinvented this kind of technology which is known as google maps every people are using this to get rid of traffic.

To sum up, by reducing people's basic need of transport is not a solution to beat the amount of traffic. With help of technology it is proven traffic issue could be solved.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, for instance, kind of, sort of, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7987012987 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69813594818 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0152485176 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32724244562 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120165320149 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968728491174 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212638866997 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355334963913 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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