Overpopulation around the world is major problem, What are the causes of this? How can problem be solved.
Overpopulation has been highlighted as an emerging issue, capturing significant public attention due to negative implications on people’s living standards. However, identifying the reasons behind the pattern could be the key to finding the solutions.
There are many reasons behind the overpopulation issue. Firstly, Due to inadequate sex education programmes accompanied by societal prejudices in many nations, young generations are not fully outfitted with proper sexual knowledge regarding to reproductive process, contraceptives, and sexually transmitted diseases, feeding into the engagement into sexual intercourse in young individuals without any preventative approaches. For example, in India, since any sex-education concepts are discouraged based on the common religious beliefs, young women are ignorant of birth control methods and forced to keep unintended pregnancies, making India now one of the second most populous nations. Second, it has been economically proved that human resources with increasing young population could be associated with the expansion of labour force, attracting outsourcing investments activities for low labour costs, which could generate occupational opportunities with economic benefits.. That is why many developing nations’ governments have conducted many population growth policies, making overpopulation an inevitable product.
Nonetheless, The issue can be coped with many solution. First, In order to address the issue of overpopulation, official authorities should stimulate the application of mandatory sex education programmes in educational institutions of any kind irrespective of the superannuated social stigma. This could raise their awareness of healthy sexual relationships and birth prevention approaches, which could lead to planned and responsible pregnancies followed by the reduced population. Second, if the governments could legislate the population control policies, the problem could be curbed. For instance, despite the infamous one-child policy capping the population boom by heavily punishing families and government officials having the second child, the national revenue still remains stable at the growth rate of 8% annually thanks to the national educational programmes promoting the labours’ expertise with higher productivity.
In conclusion, the overpopulation problem could be stemming from inadequate sex education in young generations and the government policies prioritizing economic benefits. Nonetheless, by applying mandatory sex education programmes and limiting the population explosion by governmental legislation, the problem could be addressed effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2318.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45682451253 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37392258896 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612813370474 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.460550253 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.571428571 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105131236954 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050195295821 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490737600382 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809382351089 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511958283057 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 12.26 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.48 12.4159519038 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.