In the last 100 years, we have experienced an incredible increase in the planet's population. Indeed, it is very common, particularly in developing countries like India, Bangladesh, Africa and so on. How could we tackle the problems? In this essay, I will propose some relevant solutions.
To begin with, one of the dire effects of it is the elevated crime rates. As human overpopulation drives resources and basic necessities, such as food and water, to become scarcer, there will be increased competitiveness for these resources which leads to elevated crime rates due to drug cartels and theft by people in order to survive. What's more, it can bring about lower life expectancy. That is to say, as they face increasing difficulties to supply water, food, energy and housing to their growing populations, which will have major repercussions for public health and economic growth.
To address the issue, governments should provide free guaranteed education. People should be made aware of draconian problems of human overpopulation such as ecology disaster, species extinction and global warming. Take females residing in India Kerala as instance. The females in Kerala are more educated than impoverished northern states. Therefore, they tend to have higher control birth rates than other states.
Another way of dealing with the problem is to practice safe contraception. Over and top of that, government must provide financial incentives and tax reliefs for those females who volunteer to sterilise after two children. Take China as an example, where the government has adopted one child policy. The schemes have been nearly the most successful in bringing down the run away population.
All in all, although there are profound problems like mass starvation, global warming secondary to overpopulation, I believe, we can sort out the situations, if governments, schools, society and every individual were to work hand in hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, such as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38815789474 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94900536075 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677631578947 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1464374077 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106753194131 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286360769824 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313153707987 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049638346076 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294788402951 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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