Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems?
On these days, more and more countries all over the world are confronting numerous problems caused by fast growing populations in urban areas. In particular, it is argued that pollution as well as the shortage of housing are two of the most serious problems brought about by overpopulation in metropolitan areas. Both governments and individuals have an enormous responsibility for encountering this issue. In this essay, these problems will be examined and a variety of possible solutions are also given.
Undeniably, that pollution is believed to present the initial issue. To be more specific, pollution of water resources results from the population explosion. The fact remains that it has a dramatic effect on the whole water system. According to a report compiled by US Public Interest Research Groups, it is indicated that approximately 39% of rivers, 46% of lake and 51% of estuaries are still too polluted to go fishing or swimming safely. Moreover, not only water but also air is seriously polluted. To exemplify, in a report of the Environment Defense Fund showed that “80% of the cancer risks from air pollutants nationwide is from mobile transportation sources the cancer risks from air pollutants nationwide is from mobile transportation sources”. Hence, it is obvious that the more inhabitants move to big cities, the more garbage is eliminated. In other words, the increase in the number of citizens makes a significant contribution to pollutant emission into the cities’s environment.
Another noteworthy impact is associated with the shortage of housing. To be more precise, The National Building Organization (NBO) had estimated the urban lack of house at 8.23 million in 1991 and had expected the absolute shortage to decline to 7.57 million in 1997 and 6.64 million in 2001, as an illustration. That is to say, in view of increasing population, there is a great demand for accommodation towards the migrated citizens. In addition, the amount of land in urban areas is extremely scanty; as a consequence, should the number of individuals moves to the urban areas exceedingly, the government will not have the ability to provide sufficient accommodation for all of them.
Much as a large number of alarming issues are adverse consequences of overpopulation, to diminish these difficulties, a range of strict measures is taken. The first method is that the government can increase the number of employment offers in suburbs such as providing them lands to cultivate. From then on, when they have a stable work to earn their livings, they will not have a growing tendency to aggregate in the city. In addition, the government should also develop programs such as sex education or family planning to these individuals since knowledge is one of the most essential elements to have the overpopulation problem solved. A further approach lies with formulating lucrative schemes to stimulate private builders to invest in new housing projects from the government. It is undoubted that the more houses are constructed, the more inhabitants have a better place to live. Equally important, citizens in urban areas are capable of renting unused rooms in the apartments or houses. Not only can it solve the shortage of living place but it also helps them save a great deal of money due to not having to build a house.
In conclusion, it is obvious that fast growing population in big cities in the world today have so far led to burning issues in our society, particularly pollution and lack of housing. Government and individuals are determined to make great efforts to solve these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...accommodation for all of them. Much as a large number of alarming issues are adverse consequence...
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Line 4, column 888, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...nhabitants have a better place to live. Equally important, citizens in urban areas are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, in other words, on the whole, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => OK
Preposition: 95.0 41.998997996 226% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3031.0 1615.20841683 188% => OK
No of words: 587.0 315.596192385 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16354344123 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06471937368 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 176.041082164 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50936967632 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 966.6 506.74238477 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.76152304609 315% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2412624789 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.576923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5769230769 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18837044511 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450278373919 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583402125052 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107023017858 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608435114731 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 166.0 78.4519038076 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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