Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in recent years despite the potentially harmful effects they may have on our health and on society. Governments should introduce measures to restrict ownership of mobile phones to those who need them for work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is true that nowadays people are easier to get a mobile phone for their own without a second thought. however, many people believe that the use of this device is more likely have a negative impact on the users, therefore, the government should introduce new laws to restrict people use their phones for work. In my opinion, I partly disagree with this statement in some extents.
On the other hand, there are a minor disadvantages that users could interface with when they abuse too much on telephones. A drawback of this is that mobile phones can be a problem in some public places. For instance, ringing phones cause disturbance in cinemas and school classes. Consequently, people might be annoyed or lost their concentrations on the tasks. Furthermore, according to some research, mobile phones' waves could damage our brain and cause lots of strong illnesses.
On the one hand, there are a number of benefits that a mobile phone brings to people's lives. Firstly, the mobile phone is the most popular gadget in today's worlds. The mobile phones have revolutionised the way we communicate. For example, we could keep in touch with friends, colleagues and family's member wherever we are. Secondly, mobile phones not only use for contact with others, it also has a ton of different functions such as taking photos, surfing the Internet and listening to music. Lastly, mobiles have become fashion accessories, as well as a way for rich and famous people show their wealthy.
In conclusion, despite of mobile phone's disadvantages, I believe that its potential advantages are outweigh the dangers. however, we should use our phone with care to help us getting the best benefit of it and avoiding harmful impacts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
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...ould use our phone with care to help us getting the best benefit of it and avoiding har...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03496503497 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69535745893 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0801496761 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288084105359 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100407640332 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576136529105 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182107587459 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280394276613 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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