In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break worldrecords. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
Several years ago, sport was a way to show the best result in the world just for acknowledgment, to prove you can do it. Nowadays, sport is the big show, which attracts people and money. This essay will first discuss effect this to the young generation and it will then address the question of impact this situation on the sport themselves.
There are lot young people, who go to sports club just for improving themselves. They do it to enhance their health, correct their fit, in this case, they are amateurs and it is not professional sport. When they get older, some of them take part in big competitions and become a sportsman. Of course, the professional sport is connected with a sponsorship and people forget the desire to take part just for win, they work for the prize. In my opinion, amateurs and sportsmen should not be associated with each other, because they do sports in different reasons.
Sport became one of the major attractive fields of our life. A huge stadiums are built, there are lots of people come to watch for playing their favorite teams or players. And this is not a secret that sport now is not an honest thing, this is a big show, where spectators want to watch fantastic action and ready to pay for that. In this trend, people effect on the sport, and he change more and more.
In conclusion, despite the changes in the sport, it stays one of main entertainment of our life, and this the main reason, why sportsmen do it for money and famous. As for youth, these changes do not effect on their wishes for doing sport activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se they do sports in different reasons. Sport became one of the major attractive...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'stadium'?
Suggestion: stadium
...r attractive fields of our life. A huge stadiums are built, there are lots of people com...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'changes'.
Suggestion: changes
...end, people effect on the sport, and he change more and more. In conclusion, despit...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ous. As for youth, these changes do not effect on their wishes for doing sport activit...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as for, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59074733096 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46381597922 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.384769539078 1040% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7031875264 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1428571429 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168379987406 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620940431476 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353030644352 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101955243874 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302196530379 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.