In the past sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break records. These days, they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect the sports themselves?
Since everybody know and it is undeniable fact that, sportsmen are the pride of their country due to their contribution of working hard in the way of achieving championship. However, in today’s world some people are of the opinion that, raising their flag and making their anthem to be heard all over the world is not a sportsman’s aim and it is to be awarded by money.
It is clear that time continues, and a man changes constantly. To some sportsmen sport is the activity of life which means that they do not imagine their life without it, while to some others sport is an aim of becoming ric...
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Since everybody know and it is undeniable fact that,
Since everybody knows and it is an undeniable fact that,
and it is to be awarded by money.
Description: 'it' refers to what?
Sentence: Although they were awarded fir their championship it did not distract them from their way of becoming champions over and over.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to fir and their
flaws:
Need to develop sentences smoothly.
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