People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In contemporary society, using a variety of drugs might be seen as the burden falling on the shoulders of families, schools or authorities. Some people argued that the most influent factor could come from the behavior of parents. However, in my opinion, I personally think that there are many reasons pushing the individuals to the addiction to drugs.
Concerning about the societal aspects, we have witnessed a considerable soaring of crime hotspots in many different countries, having resulted in illegal immigration, human trafficking or loose management of security systems. This is one of the main reasons explaining why the groups of criminal developed strongly as such on the collected data of government. Consequently, this issue have been affecting negatively on the life of school boards or the campus of institutions, dragging a dramatical number of adolescences to the illegal behavior of addiction to drugs. Moreover, some among the youth community tend to imitate the activities of many celebrities on the scenes of a range of movies or dramas, resulted in using drugs or e-smoking as the traces of lavish lifestyle.
Additionally, the trends of consuming products of drug or alcohol also reflected the drawbacks of education system around the world, with a lack of direction or recommendations from the lecturers. The immatures are going to be expected to avoid the types of medicine which containing the chemical substances with a lot of serious impacts on activities of neuron system or disorder the normally mechanism in body regardless they are legal or not. Indeed, education experts should offer the programs relating to teaching the legal system with the intention of heightening the awareness among our communities, contributing to decrease a rate of crime in various areas, especially in the lands locating on the middle of nowhere or alleys in many metropolitans.
Conclusion, There are many factors can influence on the conventional lifestyle of youths. this is definitely the responsibilities of preventing addiction to drugs among adolescence communities belonged to all classes of our social, including parents, relatives, schools or authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44542772861 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18736716408 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58407079646 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2475140029 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.833333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110297108279 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362286317077 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300830040085 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623698015458 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00842537713123 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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