People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs at an early age. Discuss the causes and some effects of widerspread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Addiction to drugs is a serious problem these days. However, it is immense causes related to it. If some stringent plans are not formulated and implimented then this problem can even become more deteriorated. This essay intends to highlight the causes, effects as well as solutions.
To commence with, nowadays drugs are easily available in the market due to it youngsters are easily buy it and using it in their life. Secondly, youth using it to reduce their stress when they feel under in pressure regarding the responsibilities of their family and job, Moreover, young masses join the bad company who are already using the drugs and they influence others to using it. Apart from this, most sports person are also using drugs to play best in the game and win the game.
However, as every lock has a key, when youth using the drugs on daily basis due to it effects on their health. Sometime it cause the death of the person. Furthermore, using drugs on daily basis it weaken the bondings of the family members and masses also spoil their carier. To add on, when youngsters join the bad company and using the drugs in their life they indulge in illegal activities and do crime. Due to this crimes rates are also witnessed in the world.
Hence, agglomerating above discussed causes, and effects that can be stated that this problem can be very well and effectively handled with joint and collaborative efforts of high authorities, individuals and society as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83003952569 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54838046553 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0086872943 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244076287263 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821085105287 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501251998574 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135000088483 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528668275283 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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