People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age.
Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society.
Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
The drugs uses are often popular in today's society for medication, teenagers and school children are misusing it and using it for addiction and pleasure without prescription of authorities, its use is being increasingly popular these days.
Few social scientists believed that family engagement in such activities is supporting to use it. This essay will discuss family problem and relationships as the major reason, and the suicide and health problems are the results of its misuse. In my opinion, an effective program at the local community and keeping children busy can shift pupils far from such addictions.
In most of the cases, attraction with drugs in their early age is due to the family conflicts like divorced mother and father,
and joblessness of their parents. When there is not a stable family, parents stop caring their children and don't know about them, youngsters get free time and start using heroin and cocaine to reveal the pain and shift to the new world. The youths are using those unauthorized products because of their personal affairs too. To be addicted to bad habits result in their own death either may be personally or with health problems like mental disorder, depressions, and body functioning defection.
Those harmful products are making youths dull and eradicating their creativity, which makes useless society.
To sum up, problems at the home and their personal life are leading them to quite themselves and being addicted to drugs.
In my perspective, conducting programs at the local level is an effective approach to extend their knowledge and find out the difference between drugs use and misuse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2030075188 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68743093602 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1719031149 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145681244739 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501982965281 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296498784069 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653624845607 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301917247245 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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