people believe the society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. However, others argue that there are still some advantages of adverts.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Surviving in a competitive world, where companies are competing to exceed their rivals by selling more products, advertisement could play the role of a useful asset, helping manufacturers make a profit. Some people observe advertising as a seductive method with no beneficial impact, others, on the other hand, opine that making products public offers a range of plus points.
Advertisement causes people to buy unnecessary items. Those who vote against advertising assert that stimulating commercials on television or colourful images of products published on brochures and magazines just persuade buyers to spend a great deal of money on commodities which are not necessarily essential to have. Moreover, opponents believe that the young generation is the main target of the advertising industry, as teenagers are more prone to be a allured by the appearance of the goods more that their usefulness. Therefore, they put a severe pressure on their parents to provide them with products without considering their real value.
Turning to the other side of the argument, there are some prominent advantages that adverts can bring. To begin with, publicising goods can promote people’s awareness on the latest products in the market as well as the available promotion events in which companies offer unbelievable discounts on the items. This could be really enticing for potential buyers who eagerly look for a situation making them able to purchase the requirements cheaper. Besides, the emergence of influencer marketing has been a boon to not only producers but also consumers. Goods announced by famous people are more trustable for shoppers to buy since they see known figures reliable. Consequently, this type of advertising makes people decide in a more effective way.
To conclude, although the drawbacks of advertisement on people’s lives and financial conditions should not be overlooked, I personally advocate the advertising industry as it alleviates customers’ stress on what would be more worthwhile to them to buy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49050632911 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1079155652 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.489689328 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.461538462 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144908337298 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527670340427 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410324246925 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903752162144 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164695945695 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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