People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still do not take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? What should be done to encourage people to protect the environment?
Nature is a gift of god to human mankind and it is the responsibility of every human being to take care of it. In additions, global warming and air pollution are frequently headlines on TV along with newspapers or magazines all over the world, which always keep remind us to be under the obligation to protect the environment. Nevertheless, it seems that people are generally unconscious of what they have done to the environment. This essay will discuss some reasons of this problem and recommend some productive solutions to it.
First and foremost, there is plethora of factors that people do not take responsibility to safeguard the environment. It is often argued that overpopulation is the main cause of this problem when individuals are more likely to cut down a great number of trees and forests to utilize that land to construct house and do farm or haunt and trade animals for a living. All these actions definitely will disrupt the natural balance and lead to global warming and landslides which can cause adverse damage to both people and properties. Besides that, more and more industrial zones accompanied by factories etcetera have been built with the aim of meeting the demand of extending population. As a consequence, an enormous amount of exhausted fumes along with carbon footprint is dumped directly into the environment which is the chief reason of green house gas emission.
Therefore, the government has to take proactive measures to make people more environmentally responsible. Initially, the local areas should hold workshops, campaigns or organizations with a view to boost individuals’ understanding about these hot issues so that they can be more aware of their actions by means of consuming more green products as an alternative to disposable goods that can do harm to the environment. Furthermore, I highly recommend that it would be much better for vehicle manufactures to design more environmentally friendly transports or cars and planes powered by renewable resources. Last but not least, imposing a strict restriction on the untreated waste dumped to the environment no less than severe punishment on those who have made our environment get worse and worse.
In summaries, there is always a dilemma between saving our planet from becoming an uninhabitable place and worldwide development. However, people can do something to diminish the negative effect of human activities on the environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'factories'' or 'factory's'?
Suggestion: factories'; factory's
...nd more industrial zones accompanied by factories etcetera have been built with the aim o...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of human activities on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23979591837 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12668842351 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.797149056 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.933333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1333333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270868139566 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852545285738 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660624313707 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148097289805 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371910429457 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.