People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
It is certainly true that, living in an urban area has resulted multiple problems in human life. This essay will first discuss on the various problems associated with city life and secondly discuss on the multiple government motivations to the public regarding to justifiable migration in the rural areas.
With regards to the initial concern, living in a city area such as Kathmandu, and Pokhara where people find traffic jam and the pollutions regularly which lead towards the poor health conditions. It allows maximum mobility of public and private vehicles in the road and people find uneasy with the crowd situation resulted through different means of transportation along with the poisonous gas which further affect to their health condition. On top up this, a majority of public find urban life is isolation, they are busy doing their work in multiple sectors and they really don’t find free time to have an interaction with their friends, going outside to celebrate good moment with their family. As a result of that, they have to face with the multiple additional problem related to family relationship and personal health conditions which has resulted through their busy schedule. For example, this is most evident in my country that, people often find traffic problem between Chabahil and Gaushala road of Kathmandu during their office time which further affect their professional career.
On the other hand government of respective country should motivate their citizen to move forward with regards to settle down in the rural area. Moreover, sensitizing people to shift their life in suburb areas allows people to have more healthy life along with supportive environment between the neighbors regarding fulfilling their daily needs of life. As a result of that, people can feel more cohesion and we feeling among the members of belonging group which further lead to have easier lifestyle in the rural areas. For instance, “The Himalayan Times” recently reported that, Nepal government have promoted “dignified migration to village” campaign regarding motivate the people of cities to shift in multiple rural area.
In conclusion, living in an urban areas would have more problem related to health and social environment of human life whereas promotion of government regarding dignified migration to village provide multiple opportunity to avoid such problems and offer with more comprehensive and healthy lifestyle to the human beings. Lastly, I personally believe that, living in the healthy life is most important than to have a luxurious urban life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39312039312 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68201148231 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484029484029 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7267589444 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.846153846 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230555962893 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976693619438 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375082442335 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160517821261 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026812183753 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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