People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society
How can we create an ideal society?
It is true that the public is passionate about establishing a perfect nation but not successful. Personally, I believe that an ideal community should include some core values, and societies can take steps to reach it.
There several universal values we should involve in our dream nation. Firstly, equality is the most important element that everyone should be treated fairly, regardless of their age, gender, educational level, and race. If a specific party received excessive benefits, this would probably cause mistrust and chaos in our community. Secondly, social justice is another essential factor because some people are inevitably homeless and disadvantaged in some ways. The large gap between the rich and poor would cause high crime and poverty rates and trigger social unrest. For instance, the Gini-coefficient in Hong Kong was 0.533 in 2019, which resulted in unlimited social movements at that year.
However, there are two effective methods for us to make an ideal home. I believe the change must start with the government, who need to distribute sufficient resources in education, healthcare, and infrastructure. Improving public services can provide a better living quality for the majority. Also, businessmen can play a wider role in bearing their social responsibility that takes the initiative to employ well-qualified people from various backgrounds and this would hopefully increase social mobility. For example, in 2016 it was reported in Hong Kong Apply Daily that over 90% of employees were more likely to work with no discrimination.
In conclusion, the government and merchants could implement a range of measures to build a liveable state.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45769230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96037689508 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7680309888 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14872633734 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044005632774 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689806346084 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087442269086 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086130802268 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.