People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past fifty years, there is an increasingly growing number of people who live abroad including immigrants. While it is argued by many that following customs and traditions should be taken for the sake of adapting new lives, there still remains some arguments against this issue because it is responsible for limits of a diversity of cultures. Overall, it is my personal view that local rules should indeed be obeyed when living in a new country.
First of all, it is an indisputable fact that following the local culture will give immigrants far more convenience rather than loss of freedom. During their stay in the host country, if they adopt the local customs, it will be helpful for them to get better communication with the local people. Meanwhile, when they adjust themselves to the local people's behaviour, it will make them easier to socialize with them. Also, this will help local people to better understand foreigners. They become a member of the host country and so they don’t suffer any culture shock.
Even more importantly, culture is intimately bound up with business. Knowing how to conduct your business in a new country is a vital part of the process. Understanding the culture and the customs involved is often as important as knowing how to market in those areas. there are other considerations you need to consider when manufacturing products. For instance, do your products comply with the countries local laws? Do they need to be adapted to use in different cultures? Even the packaging may need some tweaking to make it more suitable. You might also see an opportunity for a new product that would suit the new market. In addition, dealing with customers and suppliers is an important part of doing business. However, if you are dealing with countries where their first language is not the same as yours, then there will be differences in how you both communicate.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that it is vitally pivotal to be accustomed to local customs during the period of living abroad due to its impact on not your daily life but also your success. In years to come, I personally believe that education campaigns regarding preparing for culture shock should be adopted in society, particularly in schools where many students choose to study abroad to ensure better after adaptation after moving to a new country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, then, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95273631841 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72371702637 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9085485917 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.55 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211213636205 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616840788406 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452132616545 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130770806656 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683560279247 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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