People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that following the customs and traditions when residing in a new country is a way to help people quickly adaptation to new environment. While I agree that people should adapt the local culture life however they might keep their own old traditional practices.
On one hand, it is beneficial for immigrants to integrate into local cultures due to some reasons. Firstly, they are able to adapt speedily to new environment lifestyle. Therefore, they can feel that they are a part of local community which enables them to get on well with local resident . In addition, commencing a new life in foreign country, they might face numerous diplema if they still adhere to the old customs and traditional. For example, obtaining beef meat in Muslim country like India is thoroughly difficult because residents consider cow as their god. Thus, they are better to follow the local customs rather than breaking resident’s rule. Finally, adapting local culture helps newcomer to avoid being social isolated. This could be because respecting local customs and traditional practice enable people to have better cultural assimilation in a new land.
On the other hand, immigrants can adjust their way of living in order to fit in the local community. First and foremost, maintaining original culture is a way to help the next immigrants’ generation to understand the value of mother culture. For instant, Vietnamese community in USA, they are not only celebrate the new year in America but also they enjoy the Vietnamese Tet holiday which was created by their ancestor. Furthermore, if newcomers only observe the local customs and traditional practices they might probably lose their old culture and this leads to the disappearance of long – standing culture values of expatriate.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is essential for newcomers to follow the traditional and habits of locals in the host country. However the old culture can be adjusted by immigrants to blend fully into new society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17737003058 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85141504212 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5465777297 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188343959191 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704872868568 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882224969082 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151543202265 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115545094373 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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