A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The core value is the most important thing that every person should keep in mind in his whole life. Some individuals argue that a person’s trait has changed from the old-fashion values such as graciousness, honesty, and integrity to the outer manners including property and social position. I strongly disagree with this view, because I believe that the old core characteristics have been playing a crucial role in one person’s value.
To begin with, it is obvious that our society is guiding every individual to live kindly and truly through the education system. In primary school in which the foundation of a person is set up, every country has a subject called norm or mortality which define and educate children what is the main core of a man. Moreover, there are many lifestyle books written based on those features like honesty and kindness. For example, Mother Theresa is respected by the whole world by her graciousness and her great aid to the poor and patients.
In addition, the people who are gracious, kind, and honest are the one most of the people choose to be friend with and work with. The employers nowadays try their best effort to seek for the applicants who are not only well-educated but more importantly are reliable, honor, and enthusiastic. For instance, people always appreciate a kind person regardless of their occupations.
In conclusion, the apparent things such as asset and social status may immediately impress people but they are not the main things to define a person’s quality. The evidence which is mentioned above are pointing that past values such as kindness, honesty, and honor are still the most important parts of a person’s portrait.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08540925267 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8332319536 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8755893758 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174253643396 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588465897322 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441998171298 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101114049397 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425999438497 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.