Pollution and other environmental damage is caused by the developing countries which help them become richer. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
The level of damage to the environment and pollution has risen alarmingly with the modernization. Some say that the developing nations are to blame for this because it’s their activities which are accelerating this chaotic phenomenon. However, I do not think this is right to say because every nation is contributing equally.
To begin with, industries exist in almost every nation. With concerns related to the inflation of the economy of the country, these are built to manufacture goods, sell them to the consumers and earn profits. However, the count of industries is getting out of bounds. Although, it is good for the growth economically, but the waste produced is detrimental to the nature as it either becomes a part of the land or it gets dissolved in the water bodies in the form of effluents. This is not specifically limited to those nations only, which are striving to survive, it is happening in those which are thriving as well.
Moving further, people of every country use vehicles extensively on daily basis. This is the root cause of other emergent issues like pollution of the air and overusage of resources like petrol and diesel, which is non-renewable. Citizens all over the world are utilizing the capital so heavily that soon the reserves of the nature will run out and it will leave them helpless. Apart from this, rising population, which is another significant seed causing various issues arise like poverty, unemployment etcetera, is every nation’s story. This is inextricably intertwined to the harmful blows the nature is taking.
At the end, I would reinstate that all the countries, regardless of being developing or developed, are somehow contributing to make the environment increasingly ailing. Therefore, it will not be right to just blame the developing nations.
Comments
Only 6.0? I expected more.
Only 6.0? I expected more. Can someone please enlighten me about this?
I would be highly delighted.
I saw one wrong sentence:
I saw one wrong sentence:
'Although, it is good for the growth economically, but the waste produced is detrimental to the nature....'
'Although' and 'but' can't be used together.
Other than that, this essay deserves 7.5 or 8.0 I think.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17288135593 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94834588617 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5570948249 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225486883395 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641688828521 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424280857823 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118254273177 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500329119371 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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