Pollution of rivers, lakes, and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
<p style="margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(40, 70, 100); font-family: Nunito, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">In the industrialized era today, the exponential increase of pollutants has converted our water bodies into a pool of poison, making it become an alarming global issue. Several reasons behind this problem as well as some practical impacts on natural creatures and human beings will be addressed in the following essay.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(40, 70, 100); font-family: Nunito, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">To begin with, along with the advancement of technology and industry, there are three main contributors to the high rate of water pollution. The first cause to note is water pollutants including toxic chemicals, heavy metals, and waste have stemmed from factories, residents' farms, and minerals mining activities on land along the coast or far inland. Undoubtedly, the more the development of the industry is, the more the pollution in water is. Secondly, although the ocean almost gets polluted by accidental oil leakage, marine debris, particularly plastic, which originates from human daily life, has a close correlation with water contamination. Apparently, depending on the size of the containers, the toxicity of oil leaks, and the size of the ocean, the extent of the pollution would vary considerably, while human-made waste depends on their demand for housing, food, and clothes. Moreover, air pollution leads to acid rain, contaminating the water circle that enters streams, rivers, and seas. As an example, the huge amount of exhaust fumes from vehicles boosts the concentration of pollutants in the rain.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 15px; color: rgb(40, 70, 100); font-family: Nunito, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">With the numerous reasons for water pollution, the effect of this problem on the life of diverse species and people's life is powerful enough to lead the world on the path of destruction. Firstly, the risks of the community's health are negatively impacted by drinking polluted water, with a higher rate of cancer and fatal disease and potential danger of congenital malformation in babies. The number of children in Africa who suffer from infectious diseases in areas lacking clean water is also a troublesome matter today, for example. Without clean water to support life, our habitat would soon become a dead planet and humans would be extinct, even before some kinds of animals. Secondly, not only could contaminated water put animal life under threat, but it could also pose a severe hazard to organisms and vegetation that survive in water, including amphibians. This threatens the varied source of food, habitats, and the appropriate temperature for the existence of a variety of creatures.</p><p style="color: rgb(40, 70, 100); font-family: Nunito, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: normal;">To sum up, there are many specific reasons related to this issue and its serious impact have already been mentioned. Humans should take water pollution into consideration and find out solutions as soon as possible.</p>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2611, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'contaminate'
Suggestion: contaminate
...ds of animals. Secondly, not only could contaminated water put animal life under threat, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2777.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80962343096 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56226026345 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 176.041082164 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573221757322 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.761916695 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.357142857 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.1428571429 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199614478925 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795315181862 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255025060793 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199614478925 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 78.4519038076 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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